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deeper than meaning

Submitted by brittle light on Sat, 2011-11-05 09:09

some poetry is dreamy
gliding words slide
winding
warm and enticing

yet a mystery remains
much the same as
not understanding my own dreams

I quite enjoy them anyway

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft

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weirdelf

Mon, 2011-11-07 04:56

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So do I.

Although I am suspicious of any poem that mentions the words poet, poetry, poem, writing or ink. It is too easy for us to disappear up our own arseholes.

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Geezer

Mon, 2011-11-07 08:07

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understood the inference and connectivity of the lines:
Yet a mystery remains
much the same
as not understanding my own dreams
Not suspicious of this one at all, ~ Gee

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