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Completely original

I grasp my cow, it's tiny scow
so when we think, despite the sink
you grow your toes, in desperate throes
and try to make a disk of it

If when we turn, without a burn
and tackle every scullery
we skip on vile skullduggery
and that's a daisy's mis-turn

I grab your foot, without a thought
and try to make it relevant
so give up verse, and then traverse
Some broken glass,
and raise an undead revenant

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I did enjoy your pure nonsense poem, and found it humerous! Thanks for the smiles.

always, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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Like the word flow here!
delightful light

Thank You!

I was inspired by Stephen Fry's doco "World of Words" wherein he demonstrates that it is possible to write passages of completely correct English that have almost certainly never ever been written or uttered before.

cheers,
Jess
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Not my cup of napalm, but I would be slated to be castrated, doused in honey, and placed naked over a hill of fire ants if I did not acknowledge the talent here! Very original indeed!

if I did not acknowledge the vividity of your comment,
ta mate

cheers,
Jess
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