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Bad Witch/Good Witch
Bad Witch/Good Witch
sisters of the cauldron
stirring potions in the night
eye of newt and bat wing
for your ghoulish appetite
when brew 'tis made and done
they will happily conspire
a deadly spell of malice
while dancing round the fire
on night of All Hallows Even
drawing magic circles in the sand
they rise and play joining
with ghost and skeleton band
Good witches which there are few
on this night don't stand a chance
for all their deeds of good
should avoid the evil dance
so if you are a good witch
stay within your circle unharmed
for if you break the enchantment
you could be evilly charmed
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Comments
Kailashana2
Fri, 2011-10-14 11:09
I liked this poem so much I
I liked this poem so much I even remember it, Cat. Or one like it.
Bad witch/Good witch. Love it.
~A
magics02
Fri, 2011-10-14 17:04
Love love it!!
i have rto come back cant type now ... dance around the fire i will sbe there golden lady hugs xoxo
did you mean hallows eve or hallows even?
Hooded Stranger
Fri, 2011-10-14 17:11
Cat
Cat,
this has a real feel of halloween and was a joy to read.
I never knew there were good witches and bad ones!
this was a fun write indeed.
Maybe a typo?..."on night of All Hallows Even"..."Eve"
Happy Halloween!...which is a contradiction really! Lol!
HS
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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.
lou
Sat, 2011-10-15 01:01
Hi
been called an old witch, LOL!!!
Good stuff
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!