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Ass
unmovable mule
push tug this donkey won't budge
kindly check its load
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
IKnowNoBox
Sat, 2011-09-10 19:26
Thank you both Rosi, and Loni
Not all who are stubborn are stubborn for no reason.
In ink,
Dabbler
author commentscribbler
Sat, 2011-09-10 20:06
hello
At Last! a poem about me lol..........stan
Ian.T
Sat, 2012-10-06 18:58
David
A good Senyru as aposed to the Haiku, you should join Barbara's Workshop as we are doing an Eternal Renga which is a Haiku/Senyru of 5-7-5 then the next lines are two lines of 7 syllables each, the normal length for these is around 35 Stanzas but we is lazy, Take care great to have you on board,
Yours Ian.T
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