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All In Humility

Only great people
are humble like you
and I,

That's why along the sea beaches
we roll
and
the surfs pass by ...

But then some one looks back
and says
Wasn't he
He?
Yeah that's
All about life aint it.

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It makes me grin. I dig it. The last two lines make the poem and wrap it up quite nicely.

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J.A. Fisher

sets my heart in a spin ,
some day we shall have more fun ,
when
A Nobel we win

we will become good friends
once we know each other as poets only
see u around

Today after years
a Swedish Nordic poet
was awarded
the NOBEL

Someday when in the bushels of time ,
we surface more simpler than naive
perhaps our faces shall reveal ,
the purpose of mankind
....hopefully......................

loved

author comment

wonderful poem loved! I have missed you.

Much Love,
Elizabeth

MISS U ALL Neopoets of the world...

sets my heart in a spin ,
some day we shall have more fun ,
when
A Nobel we win

we will become good friends
once we know each other as poets only
see u around

Today after years
a Swedish Nordic poet
was awarded
the NOBEL

Someday when in the bushels of time ,
we surface more simpler than naive
perhaps our faces shall reveal ,
the purpose of mankind
....hopefully......................

loved

author comment

'have the humility to accept your greatness'
we are in synch,
and proud to be so with a fine piece of poetry like this.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

You have been the architect of my poetic mind
you do lure .....
That's now for sure.
to u i bow

loved

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