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Achilles loses the race

Imagination.

It's all about God (the roving bandit she is)
playing with all the missing pieces, stealing all the
best lines never written
and blowing scene after scene with a wintery breath
the first night of her refusal in her deep purple phase,
the moonglow her pale-skinned backdrop.

Who then fills in sepia gaps
with down-to-earth native poems? Let's not
tarry about our business or
make snap judgments because, if I remember
correctly, life turns itself on a dime and nothing
is ever quite the same, though the sameness feels
much like an archaic boredom of the disinherited,
disaffected and the diminished parts of me
walking the spirit realm with vacant untoward eyes.

There's no chasm between my imagination and what is
that isn't held in some far-flung thought--
thrown about in torments of decision. I come down
from your ivory tower and my burning mountain on foot,
well traveled, nevertheless.

When the grapes of wrath blossom even stranger fruit than I
can recall and then withers away on some other acre,
I am filled with the
scent of wild strawberries and imagine I am
unfinished.

Like a drab little sparrow, falling from his chosen perch and frozen to your
touch, my Love,
only the song remains, tethered to sky
like drops of a lullaby.

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Comments

You know I connect with the connection of you and your writing. It may have taken me some time here but once I felt it and read it not only once but twice it leaves me with thoughts and good reflections on your words.

Let's not
tarry about our business or
make snap judgments because, if I remember
correctly, life turns itself on a dime and nothing
is ever quite the same, though the sameness feels
much like an archaic boredom of the disinherited,
disaffected and the diminished parts of me
walking the spirit realm with vacant untoward eyes.

Lets not tarry about our business
or make snap judgements
as I remember correctly
life turns itself on a dime (good cliche)
and nothing is ever quite the same (true)

though the sameness feels much like
an archaic boredom ( good cliche and so true it is)
of the disinherited, disaffected
and the diminished parts of me (like this line and I relate)

walking the spirit realm with vacant untoward eyes. ( like this one alot)

Good job, Bella Anna or Anna Bella:)

To Kailashana:

Smile friend as the sun smiles upon you
and the moons halo shall shine down on you
on the darkest of the nights..

Let your life be the poem you write. You are spot on with that. As we do.

Hugs
Mona

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