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Happy ending... not
Pain a figment of the mind
Love an illusion of a kind
The game we play,
because we hope and dream.
Fairy tales always end,
with happily ever after
Happy endings don't exist
But, bitter agony does
Shall I read the list
of all the misery?
The list never ends.
But, defeat is not admited
because life is given to love
when you believe in happy endings
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Been awhile since I've written anything...
Editing stage:
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Comments
DawningDaytripper
Tue, 2011-07-05 06:39
Hiddy ho there good neighbor, Alice!
A few mispells in the last verse, but very open and raw. I see it expanding, I hope.
Julie
D.D.
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Alice Ember
Tue, 2011-07-05 14:12
Thanks
Thanks you guys.. I'll work on it and edit it later on tonight.
author commentraj
Tue, 2011-07-05 14:55
Alice
you have put across your perception of love in a good way...
how about a wee bit of change as in
Happy endings don't exist
But, bitter agony does
Shall I read the list
of all the misery?
(of the painful hurts)
raj (sublime_ocean)
Alice Ember
Tue, 2011-07-05 18:45
hmm...
That sounds good.. I'll add it to my editting list. thank you.
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