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A special peace poem...
A special peace poem
I don’t pertain the mantle of perfection,
I just love to see my words on a page.
Maybe it’s not so pleasant for others ,
keep reading it may improve with age.
Yours not mine…
To rumble around my big empty head,
with spelling and diction what i covet.
Can’t say what I write will be special,
but I can say without fear that I love it.
Hope you feel the same….
Special is a term so very often lightly used,
I’d say we’re all kind of special to someone.
So come out fighting with pen, get bruised,
if not then you’ll sure miss all the fun.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
To break someones ice, to do it in a thrice , only trying to write nice, we should not live like mice....
Editing stage:
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Comments
scribbler
Sat, 2011-06-25 17:26
Hi Roscoe
Brought a smile to my face...........stan
Roscoe Lane
Mon, 2011-06-27 16:33
I'm glad,
I'm glad, your smiling with me. Regards Roscoe....
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentKailashana2
Sat, 2011-06-25 17:33
Way cool.
Way cool.
I couldn't be special unless Ur2.
~A
Roscoe Lane
Mon, 2011-06-27 16:39
Thank you,
Thank you, and you are very special to Neopoet and me. Love Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentBarbara Writes
Sat, 2011-06-25 18:37
Hi Roscoe
nice i like
to be special is to be special
but not always fun
your special is fun and way cool
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Roscoe Lane
Mon, 2011-06-27 16:46
Thank you,
Thank you, i've been busy and have just read your profile, if you've raised four children and now back at college. You are special in my eyes, promise i'll catch up on your poetry. Love Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentwesley snow
Sat, 2011-06-25 22:32
A very worthy trice was spent.
A guy could go on a little ways picking on the meter, rhyme and inner logic, but I prefer to cut to the chase- This is a wholly delightful little poem. Just a superior piece of whimsy. Thank you.
wesley
W. H. Snow
A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley
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Roscoe Lane
Mon, 2011-06-27 16:48
Thank you,
Thank you Wesley, i'm glad you enjoyed, sometimes it's better written as it comes out. Regards Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
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