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rain
i.
you drew clouds
under my feet
to break my fall
only light
this side
of creation
salmon skies
embraced
your tenderness
ii.
I heard
your heart
calling
only love
will show
the way
let us
reconcile
this passion
before
it turns
to rain
and earth
swallows
our tears
goodbye
goodbye
we meet again.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Thanks Raj.
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Comments
raj
Fri, 2011-06-24 07:38
ahhhhhhhhhh,,,i loved these
ahhhhhhhhhh,,,i loved these lines
salmon skies
embraced
your tenderness
raj (sublime_ocean)
magics02
Fri, 2011-06-24 11:13
Anna
Just wonderful the feeling and vision I got from this piece of work of yours. I meant to ask you before do you have a book out? If not get busy:)
Love Mona