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inbetween two worlds
"I hear she was sentenced
to life."
said one angel to another
the wind pressed on the meadow green
daisies roared like young waterfalls
willows danced in the sun like naked trees
only a cry was heard
this side of heaven.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Written yesterday. The poem I wrote this morning will be submitted to Eddie's workshop.
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Comments
MichelleK
Sun, 2011-06-26 06:36
Very nice, concise poem. Some
Very nice, concise poem. Some great concepts going on here:)!
Can't wait to see where this ends up once it's been workshopped:)!