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test
a test of the workshop button
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Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Region & Country
New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem
Favorite Poets
P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...
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Eduardo Cruz
Mon, 2011-06-20 02:23
Test answer
work or not
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentscribbler
Mon, 2011-06-20 15:28
hi Eddie
Nice free verse , now try it in western classic lol............stan
Eduardo Cruz
Mon, 2011-06-20 23:03
bad penny
your everywhere
Hahaha!
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentloved
Mon, 2011-06-20 22:31
Work or Not....
I dare say not,
As no work shall make you
My dear Eddie, not Jack,
A dull boy, not lad
And
If you work like Stan does,
Then Loved can't at all shirk.
So hold all hands,
In ring –a -ring roses,
Work or not to work
All ills disposes,
So work and compose,
A poem each,
On Eddie or Rose,
May be Stan,
If it does you please
and
As Lou and Barbara Whites stand by
For any emergency,
Thanks to friends,
All of thee
For reading me...
loved
Eduardo Cruz
Mon, 2011-06-20 23:04
No, No, No,
thank you!
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentEduardo Cruz
Tue, 2011-06-21 03:37
second test
second test
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentKailashana2
Tue, 2011-06-21 07:21
I won't be submitting here in
I won't be submitting here in free worse. ;-)
Don't know if the workshop button is working, our page looked different on the Shark pool.
~A
Kailashana2
Tue, 2011-06-21 07:22
let's see what highlighting N
let's see what highlighting N/A does
Kailashana2
Tue, 2011-06-21 07:23
nothing
nothing
Eduardo Cruz
Tue, 2011-06-21 07:27
Anna
I tried also and nothing time to contact tech support
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentEduardo Cruz
Tue, 2011-06-21 18:40
test
new test
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentEduardo Cruz
Wed, 2011-06-22 04:03
Test 3
final test before beginning workshop of the highlight button
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentEduardo Cruz
Wed, 2011-06-22 04:04
eureka
It works!!
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentEduardo Cruz
Wed, 2011-06-22 04:18
Ian
Wise arse! hahaha!
come join my workshop it will be fun to have a madman like you. well interesting to say the lease. LMAO!
Regards,
Eddie
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
author commentHooded Stranger
Wed, 2011-06-22 06:50
Eddie
Here's a workshop test comment
HS
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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.
Hooded Stranger
Wed, 2011-06-22 06:50
Eddie
Here's a non-workshop comment.
HS
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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.
Eduardo Cruz
Wed, 2011-06-22 08:56
boss
stop shadowing me! hahaha
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
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