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People

Don't want to hear how your day has been
I really don't care, it adds nothing to my day
Take your conversation somewhere else
You're just so fuckin' irritating, so fuck off

Blah, blah, blah, I ain't listening

Don't want to be told about your sad life
I really don't have the time for empathy
So please go tell some other idiot instead
Can't you see you're wasting my fuckin' time

(chorus)
I don't like people, they don't like me
I dislike everybody, and they dislike me
Give me solitary confinement any day
Throw away the key
Just to keep you people out of my way

(chorus)
I can't stand people, they can't stand me
I hate people, and they all really hate me
Lock me up in a solitary cell any day
Throw away the key
Just to keep you people out of my way

Don't want to know what happened yesterday
I really don't care, it makes no odds to me
So get your smiling face out of the door
You're so fuckin' annoying, so fuck you

Blah, blah, blah, I ain't listening

Don't want to know how great your life is
Not interested, I really couldn't give a fuck
Each word you speak I reject and ignore
Can't you see how fucked off I am with you?

© 2011 hoodedstranger.com

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EXXXXXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now leave me the fuck alone about how fucking tired you are, I gotta listen to you moaning and a=groaning singing for your suppa.

hehehehe. This is fun, right on and loved it. There's gotta be a part 2 written just for you. ;-)

~A

~A

Anna,

a part two?...hadn't really given it much consideration.

This was just an angry rant...I feel so much better now.

I have no music for it yet...just a fast tempo...might need to tighten up the chorus, a little too wordy and trips up a touch too.

Thanks for reading,

HS

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Dan, I was loving your rant, and started a rant of my own about your rant, which would be the part 2. It's so much fun and soooooo true. When I am down and someone is all smiley-faced and life is just sooooo perfect, I'd like to.........

~A

We gotta talk about your favourite lyricists. Some of them I am familiar with others I will get familiar if I can find them on youtube.

Part II, the co-write maybe?

This will be a most aggressive song...I will work on it shortly.

My favourite lyricists...happy to discuss them in detail with you.

Thanks,

HS

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Ditto and I know this one felt good after you got it out of your system. I was thinking of doing this exact thing myself this week. But

You

must

of
been in my head:)

And on my porch

Spirit of love to you Hood
Mona

Mona,

actually some of this came from a recent PM we had...this isn't me telling you to fuck off!!...honest, but the way you vented some anger about other issues helped give me the idea.

So I was in your head and I am always on that porch...although I also have a porch of my own...with a packet of cigs and bottle of JD, just for you and me.

thanks for commenting, I was worried it would offend some 'people'.

HS

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and I gathered some of just that. I did not take offense in one bit for I felt the same way and now I know how to do it. I like to hear this one played out.

Porch is hot!!!!

Love to you my friend
Mona

Mona,

I am honoured to be your venting vessel - we understand each other well enough to vent as friends.

I can't wait to record this one...I'll keep you posted.

Take care 'Lady of the Porch'

HS

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Glad it made you laugh...it was real fun writing and I was quite concerned how quickly I found all these words about hate!! I must take more Prozac...I am hoping for a intravenus drip to have it pumped straight in!!

You are right that until I create the music, I may well have to alter some words here and there. That always happens, but I am often quite lucky to have my music partner work around the words rather than getting me to work around the melody.

Lou has offered some line suggestions too, which I always take away with me and have them ready in case the suggestions fit better once I am standing in the recording booth. That's why I love writing lyrics...there is always an end product beyong just the words.

regards,

HS

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Sounds like a huge fuck off to the world. You know how I love a good rant, so this song really fits the bill.

I think the second line of the first verse, might sound better if you said something like ' I really don't care, so go fuck yourself'. The third line could be ' take your shit somewhere else,' I think the word conversation doesn't fit comfortably.

Fucking love this rant.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

yes it is a big fuck off to the world...sometimes I just want to be left alone and take no interest in the people around me.

I have taken a note of your line suggestions and will work with them. Thanks for the ideas.

I can't wait to record this one...a love ballad with a choir backing vocals...maybe a Christmas release!! LMFAO!

HS

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Dan,

A Christmas single ah ? You could do a duet with good old Cliff Richards PMSL!!

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

Cliff Richard is my idol!

LMFAO!

HS

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JayCee,

thanks for reading and commenting.

I like it if the reader can hear the music to my words.

thanks mate,

HS

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its not at all like a sound of music song but i would like to call it a therapeutic song to get the bugs out of one's system which is also necessary at times...i am sure you will be working on its structure ....because it is not as perfect as you are with it...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Raj,

it is, or was, therapeutic for me...it allowed me to vent some frustrations in a safe environment.

Structure is ok, but word placements might need amending...won't really know until I record it.

Thanks for reading and commenting my friend,

HS

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So exactly when did you invade my dreams Dan? I don't sleep often so it must of been between the fuck and the you, lol! I love the in your face boredom. That's a compliment by the way. I would be very interested in hearing what tune you create to this one. Seems like something Nickleback would record. Enjoyed every fuck me verse my friend!

Kim
(V)

Rottie
Pegasus was a genius,
living within a suit of difference.
He liked what he was,
nodded in respect and
simply flew . . . away.

By: K. Mulroney

" I am who I am, say what I say, do what I do. With no apology."

Kim,

I wasn't aware I had the ability to steal dreams...an interesting idea.

I am still working on the arrangement to go with this, but expect it to be fast paced, goth sythns and a very fast and loud bass line and slightly shouted vocals.

Glad you enjoyed it...it has had more response than I thought it would.

thanks for dropping by and I will get back to you tomorrow regards our PM.

regards and thanks,

HS

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Would this be sung in the manner of a Simon and Garfunkle or BeeGees song?...............lmao..............stan

I was thinking more along the lines of Neil Diamond, Tony Bennett, or Pat Boone. I hear Elvis has left the building and ain't coming back. ;-)

~A

I know Elvis has already left the building but when we begin our live show, he won't have been the last to leave, quickly!

Lol!

HS

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Stan,

I was thinking you on the banjo and Anna on the tamborine...I'll sing!

First live show is next Thursday!

LOL!

HS

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I know just how you feel! I wish I could say these words to my sister who calls me often to complain about her crummy life. She wants no suggestions on how to change it, just sympathy. And NEVER does she ask me how I am!!!

Great rant!!

love, Cat

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
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Cat,

send her a copy and say I wrote it for her on your behalf!!

Lol!

HS

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It's been awhile since you've posted. Is everything alright? E-mail me and let me know how it goes?

always, Cat

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Cat,

I haven't posted on Neo for a while, just been doing Neo stuff behind the scenes. There's no problems, everything is alright...honest!

HS (working on that tri-write tonight)

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