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From a Reader's Perspective GENERAL

Second version of a readers perspective which is???

If at times,
Clock's hands
Were pushed back
For years as
one may assume
the computer existed

Just think how the Bard,
Would’ve faced the music,
To clarify his newer
birth of words
Not contained in the dictionary.

What power did he wield?
To use a word such as musify,
As it then had not existed.
The Bard I daresay
would have had an
explanation the way

All poetic critiques
Ask for nowadays
Thank God
I can hear him,
The bard, sigh!

Amen!

If times,
Clock's hands
Were pushed back
For years
And
Then one assumed the computer existed
Just think how the Bard,
Would’ve faced the music,
To clarify his newer birth of words
Not contained in the dictionary.

What power did he wield?
To use a word such as musify,
As it then hadn't existed.

The bard I daresay would have had
Any explanation the way
Neopoet critiques
ask now a days.
Thank God
I can hear him sigh!
Amen!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

and work of free verse. I enjoyed reading it. Should Reader's in the title be possessive? Would you consider using nowadays instead of now days? Just asking...

vexations

since corrected
thanks

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I just read this and I read it earlier this morning also so please take a peek:

If times, (If at times?)
Clock's hands
Were pushed back
For years as
one may assume
the computer existed

Just think how the Bard,
Would’ve faced the music,
To clarify his newer
birth of words
Not contained in the dictionary.

What power did he wield?
To use a word such as musify,
As it then had not existed.
The Bard I daresay
would have had an
explanation the way

Neopoet critiques
Ask for nowadays
Thank God
I can hear him sigh!
Amen!

Loved I did not spend much time on it but I put my spin on it. let me know what you think. I like to collaborate on it with you.

Love Loved
Ms Mona

But don't make me spin,
I’m ready to be spun,
If for nothing else
But just a bit of fun,

Yet, incidentally where is the spin
From where do I begin?
To spin?
Do give me the fishly fin
So that I may rightly spin.
As long as you add a spin

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Remeber the game spin in the bottle. lol I remember it was fun and so was the spinning yoyo's What did you think about my suggests or my spin. I would like to know

Love to you
Mona

and then say,
tomorrow i shall also have a relook
as my mind is tired today

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I understand and shall visit back tomorrow. You can count me in:)

Good evening to you

friendly mona

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I've never said that before, have I?

It adresses so many things, the changes in language, the effects of technolgy, the difficulty of comprehending the classic poets.

My only crit, which you use often, is referring to Neopoet. Your best poems stand alone and don't need to limit temselves to our little community.

cheers,
Jess
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in general has been incorporated
as desired.

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