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"UP&DOWN UP&DOWN"
"UP&DOWN UP&DOWN"
Margaret Ann Waddicor 8th May 2011.
See saw she saw
what she didn't oughta
the tailors daughter in ...
well its a slaughter of her pose
her panty hose tangled
and earrings so spangled
ends up on her toes.
No one knows
but she's pregnant
it doesn't show yet,
but the town is awaiting her bet
cos she's one that's around
all the beds of the land
yes you bet.
She swinces and winces
about in the street
and captures her man with a look
there's not a thing seen in a book
she experiments with this and with that
what's that...
a secret
sly cat.
Her beer is so tepid
her heart is so cold
she's getting quite old
you'd wonder that some care to dine
at her table again
oh the swine.
The shed is her haven
in the gardens of Eden lane
you'd think she was rich
she's still such a bitch
but who bears
the blame.
Style / type:
Free verse
Last few words:
:)
Editing stage:
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Comments
judyanne
Sun, 2011-05-08 09:34
lol
amazing annanya
you have coined a word here i see
'swinces' - i like it.... as with the jabberwock burbling and the slithy toves giring and gimbling, it induces a wonderful image....
love judyanne
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Nordic cloud
Sun, 2011-05-08 15:25
I must be honest and say that
I must be honest and say that this is like a Norwegian word not the same but nearly and it seemed to fit the style of person so I used it. Thannk you judyanne, how lovely to hear from you again. Love you Ann
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
author commentBonitaj
Sun, 2011-05-08 15:07
Loved it Anne!
Good ol' Chaucer-ish antics here! ;)
Boni
Bonitaj
Nordic cloud
Sun, 2011-05-08 15:23
There's a lot in the medieval
There's a lot in the medieval poets that isn't so apparent if one cannot understand the language isn't there Bonny. Thank you and love Ann.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
author commentNordic cloud
Sun, 2011-05-08 15:22
Aw shucks Shirl I was having
Aw shucks Shirl I was having fun it all came of the see saw of Pysve and then the rhythm made it into this ha ha! Love to you Shilr from SUNNY NORWAY, its been 22%C and its not Summer yet, but all has BURST out at one moment leaves were not on all the trees when we got back from Mallorca now blooming Spring has sprung. Wonderful. Love to you, I know you're not a swincy lady. Ann
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
author commentNordic cloud
Thu, 2011-05-12 02:01
:)
It was the see saw Sh!! Thank you Princess Rosina,
LuvAnn x
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
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