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Oh! Soldier
Oh! Soldier
It is beyond my stature,
To comment,
When all stalwarts,
Have given their scent
But still soldier,
I hopefully do venture,
I dare to comment
So do not lament!
I have seen worst volleys
In my life,
In the dungeons of the Far East,
The jungles were our temples
Gracing our strength,
Courage and peace,
Perhaps you may have heard of Vietnam,
Now tis Iraq or Syria in turn,
May be Pakistan
Or Lebanon
Your soft feet
And
Melodious voice
Are a real treat
Soldier from the States,
You I lovingly greet
Soldier Two
Thy Sweet Words
Swell my heart
With overflowing joy
Another lovely flavour,
If you want to savour,
Come ahoy!
Oh! Boy
And
Let me know
What toy
You enjoy….
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
loved
Wed, 2011-05-04 13:08
yeah i realised it later
will correct it
thanks
have u read about the frosty nobel for uuuu
loved
scribbler
Wed, 2011-05-04 14:04
hi loved
So many fail to realize there are real people beneath a uniform. Thanks for the reminder...............stan
loved
Wed, 2011-05-04 15:34
i am glad
u r on my side
we wish all soldiers well
this poem is a consequence of some young soldier
who visited my profile
thanks friend
glad u liked it
loved