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Revelation Of Time... old poem minor typo edits

Revelation Of Time

Time and tide wait for no man as also the changing of the moon,
Yet we would like time to stand still, to have more, certainly as a boon.
Whenever we are facing the sun our faces glow
Then we do know how the time does really flow.

The markets are down and the recession we have found.
We find the markets are surely enough, a big round
Zero, of course I needn’t have to discuss and feel,
How ignorant a person today yourself you reveal.

Some know the share markets intricacies and inner nuances too,
But those who lose out are ignorant blokes, like me and you.
The share brokers make hay as their sun shines, whenever the markets fall,
Its guys again like us in folly whose hopes remain tall.

So once again my friend as usual I warn you now,
Please do stay away from the share market somehow.
You shall then run around to save your shaven head,
All will be sorry if you are going to be dead.

Time alone is the master of all that on earth we do,
Best we should know all that’s’ about our due.
Be sure to always remember Time is not your slave but your master
So the earlier you realise it, you can run that much the faster.

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Revelation Of Time
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