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( Haiku )

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sentience rekindled
eyes are brightened, heart is thawed
smiles from a daughter

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Traditionally I think this is a Senryu as it holds reference to a person rather than a Haiku that is nature personified. But even in that, this is a lovely smile.

Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche

Yes, Senyru.....I use Haiku as the prime set , ( senyru as a subset )... for those less esoteric than yourself!
Is my elitism showing? I shall stop this practice immediately! haiku for haiku, senyru for senyru, from now on when clearly discernible.

your visits are always enjoyable

sincerely

Al

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Another good one, I love the image here, so vivid and intense.

Senryu...haiku...lol just call it "japan-esque"!

Respectfully, Jim

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I like it "Japan-esque" works for me...and thanks for the life affirming compliment

Al

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