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eucalyptus viminalis

 

 

 

I reached up, and ever up,

my palm skimming grey, morning green,

and a wraith of sandstorm-brown.

I climbed and saddled myself astride

the notch of two dividing, naked limbs,

my sap to the tree’s sap, my limbs locked around you,

my lips to your smooth, cool bark;

the scent, the sense of your leaves,

the bitterness of girls’ hair in the rain,

the taste of it on my tongue.

I knew how there was no right mind in love,

only being grafted against my will to the eucalyptus,

now less than half woman,

yet not quite all tree.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I have to come back for second read but I caught the essence in this write and the image of it all says much. Good job Marie

Blessings
Mona

Thanks, Mona.

M

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Nah pop no style, a strickly roots.

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come read when I saw the title :) and I love the joining of the tree genus with the human one and the aroma's of the eucalypti are well known, so much so they put it into a liniment they call Goanna Oil lol which literally doesn't mean there is a goanna in it at all :P Marie this is just you with that soft girlish edge I love reading in your work.

Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche

I write a poem about sex and you talk about my 'soft girlish edge'? :D :D :D

'Goanna Oyl' - now there's a nice idea for a nom de plume.

Seriously, though, it's nice to have my soft girlish edges admired once in a while.

M

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Nah pop no style, a strickly roots.

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This gives a whole new meaning to "tree hugger". I think the idea of love turning wooden is great............scribbler

Indeed it does. I once wrote half a story about a woman who fell in love with a copper beech (the other half was written by Joanne Harris).

M

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Nah pop no style, a strickly roots.

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Marie, your scottish sense of humor is showing :P

Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche

... I'm kidding?

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Nah pop no style, a strickly roots.

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