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haiku III
The stars are the eyes,
the universe is watching
While you watch it move
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
mand
Fri, 2011-04-22 04:24
Hi Eddies
Another good one.
Love Mand xxxxx
Eduardo Cruz
Fri, 2011-04-22 04:37
Mand
Thank you so much! ooooo
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
Eduardo Cruz
Fri, 2011-04-22 04:54
rosi just remember
5 - 7 - 5
17 syllaibles it's that easy.
the charchters must reflex the end thought
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE