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haiku III

The stars are the eyes,
the universe is watching
While you watch it move

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Another good one.

Love Mand xxxxx

Thank you so much! ooooo

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

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5 - 7 - 5
17 syllaibles it's that easy.
the charchters must reflex the end thought

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

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