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She Wrote Off Rape MIXED VERSION

She Wrote Off Rape

An uncle guardian,
He took his wife
And me,
For a joyous ride
He slipped into the beach.
Parked his car
And whispered in my ear
Would you like a ride on me?

My hairs stood on end,
Teenage smacked
Of stark nudity,
Virgin me,
Infidel he,
His wife asleep
In the back seat,
He wanted to eat me

She was distraught
At his menacing thought,
A guardian what?
She felt smeared of a stench of rape,
As his breath went down her nape,
Thanked God she wasn’t alone,
Else she’d been raped.

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the simplicity magnifies the power of this.bravo........................stan

you had read the poets true HAIKU AND ACKNOWLWDGEMENT OF THE FACT THat
it did happen last night the night after she wrote it
u'll have grt regards for the teenager
so i composed an admixture.
thanks for the read

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this kind of write pisses me off, just the thought that there are preditors out there revolts me. I have three daughters. there grown now. they range from 40 - 22yrs. old. I can not imagine such a thing happening, I would hunt the bastard down. I can do it I've done it before for lesser reasons.
To real this write, I try to avoid such ugly thoughts. It's just a choice I have made, it's not buring my head in the sand.

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

where there are mixed multi racial and multiple marriages
any thing is possible
we must face realities of life.
this is based on a true confession
by some one i have no need to doubt
she is still a virgin 19 years aage

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