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UNCIVIL WAR

150 years ago on this date the American war between the states began. This is for the over 600,000 who died in that conflict. ( another poem from old site)

Let's now not talk of right or wrong
who was weak and who was strong
forget the leaders and their goals
but just the ones who fought, poor souls

Some wore grey and some wore blue
and often they each other knew
the war that started out as "grand"
too rapidly grew out of hand

The sides, it seemed, soon grew unable
to put war's horses back in stable
on both sides were soldiers bold
most of whom never grew old

They fought in cover and formation
each fought for God and their own nation
although afraid they never fled
both colors bleeding blood of red

Had it remained a border war
it may have ended long before
hostilities became so strong
none could admit to being wrong

The grey fought even stronger yet
when armies on their homeland met
they saw blue cousins as invaders
themselves as home's front line crusaders

In farmers' fields and woods they fell
each side creating its own hell
of rifle fire and cannon shot
the reason for the fight forgot

At the end of each great battle
the wagons' and the hearses' rattle
told of death toll ever growing
as result of whirlwind sowing

When seemed the war would never end
at Gettysburg, a change of wind
in Pickett's charge the grey clad fell
as if from a scythe in open dell

This turning point when Lee was beat
began the long bitter retreat
then Sherman's rampage to the sea
showed grey how ugly war could be

It seems the best of either side
for their ideals fought and died
each sacrifice was someone's brother
and left behind a grieving mother

Each soul who chose to give his all
in blue's triumph and grey's fall
when laid to rest beneath the sod
were each beloved by kin and God

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Nothing at all to say.

Just well done my friend, well done.

Respectfully, Race

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Thank you. I will no doubt revisit this subject as it has so much to do with the world we live in today.........stan

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The U.S. Civil War is altogether fascinating and disconcerting. And I wonder if we will ever learn from our past mistakes.

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'write on! let these words free.'

If nothing else, I think we learned that war should be a last choice..........stan

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only to be entered into with great reluctance and not trigger happy blood lust giddiness.

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'write on! let these words free.'

the thought never even crossed my mind, interesting idea.........................stan

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Awesome, I had the good fortune a year ago to be on vacation in the states and was staying with friends in Virginia and I got to see some of the battlefields in and around Richmond including walking on the one at Gaines Mill. It was an eerie experience, the old cannons are still there and it's got the original farmhouse still standing and the sign reads 15,000 lie buried in this field. It's so quiet it's haunting, not a bird noise or even wind and yet it was warm and we were in the middle of a forest. It was surreal. I also got to visit Washington's House and Jefferson's at Monticello and walked Arlington. It's one of the best experiences I've had on holiday.

Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche

there is a different feel to battle cemeteries isn't there? Did you know that Arlington was Robert Lee's (a southern general) home ? The plantation was turned into a burial place so that he could never return home......scribbler

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We were allowed to go through the home which stands at the highest point in Arlington, buried right beside him are the black legions of soldiers used during the civil war which did not lose its irony on me as I read the memorial to their bravery to then turn and see his own slave quarters behind the home. I wonder how far we've come since then eh?

Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche

One of the few things good(other than preserving union) to come out of this war was the emancipation of slaves and even it was done badly.I often wonder what the outcome of 1st and 2nd world war would have been if America had stayed divided................stan

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I like your poem, I was looking for a bit of bias on your
part but didn't really find it ... maybe the reference to
Sherman's push to the coastline, because the "South"
had their raids as well so they were well aware by that
time how ugly war was and how easy it was to fall into
the "hatred" that accompanies much of it. Even if you
were to go into it knowing that the man on the other side
is someone you know, it would be hard to look at him the
same way after hearing what must've been all the horror
stories going around the campfires, on both sides. The
Civil War should have never happened, but it did, as well
as every other war on this planet that man in his infinite
intolerance has and will wage on each other ...

sorry for going on

Richard

I think Sherman may have been the first semi-modern general to practice unlimited warfare where you attack not just soldiers but their civilian capability to wage war. Even at this late date, I can't bring myself to refer to it as the "civil" war. BTW Other phrases I've heard it referred to as : war between the states, war of northern aggression, the recent unpleasantness, the calamity. I can picture those old southern dragons who thought the mere mention of Woah as being crass thinking up phrases which were fit to pass their genteel lips lol...........stan

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