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Flicking Dust

little worlds
in the sun

to what music
do they dance?

and swirling
across the beams
ever so lightly

there must be music!
tiny indescernable bands
or mariachis, maybe?

unimpressed with my presence
or disruptive sigh
they waltz on and on and on

I watch
I wish I could hear their song

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Free verse
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We are here but where is here when compared in our universe, maybe the size of dust being flicked. A very thought provoking poem, well writen which makes we wan't music for as long as i'm here.Regards Roscoe.

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

thought provoking poem. I question the question marks. Not sure I undertand the use of the first one.


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