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cruising country roads
music blaring, wind blown hair
backseat full of friends


First off I like the word Jalopy! it just rolls off the tongue. But I also like the image you have portrayed! it reminds me of my youth, those were the days! Full of summer fun and freindship.

Just wonderful - you have given me a whole head full of memories in just three lines.

Love Mand xxxxxxxxx

sorry for this late reply... sometimes I forget my manners...glad you liked this small piece...I liked writing it
thanks for stopping by


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