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Transformation of Energy

Transformation of Energy

I don't know much,
About the nuances of poetry
But one thing is for certain,
All energy is indestructible,
For ever it’s under transformation,
My minds eye
Opens your eyes
And
My poem transforms
Into a script,
Energy continues to transform,
Bit by bit...

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Free verse
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I like the way you think!

Love Mand xxxxxx

its been very sporting of u

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My Minds Eye

The cortex lies in the forehead,
This is the minds third eye.
It can see,
Visualise,
Interpret,
Generate
And
All that there is in life,
This eye alone evaluates,
This is known as
The minds third eye.

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author comment

behind the concept of 'tame'
then even in the activity of the lions
there may be transformation to be had!

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'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

the Dachshund transform into a hotdog? LOL ~ Gee

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trans mogrification ... what ever
its a unique concept
glad u r along side with me

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the transformation of the words, made this a good one. ~ Gee

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