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A Life's Song

.....A Life's Song.....

blue swells of sadness
gliding atop a cool groove
she knows it by heart


he molts poems
she understands


yes! slough the slight ones, and hopefully, a new batch will sprout with more vigor, vitality, and heart!


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This is excellent, so much packed into so litte, with so much feeling.
"a'top" needs no apostraphe
But who cares; this is wonderful.

Respectfully, Race

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

thanks. I haven't been around much for a couple of months (on Neopoet). I ran out of anything to say.

still not sure if I can come up with anything worth saying, let alone saying it well...but I suppose I'll keep returning and hope. (though I do like this little piece a lot ). Your input is always very encouraging. thanks again


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