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Eroticised

Eroticised

Thanks for the toooooooooooooo
I thought
You would have said
Only loved
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Can
Dooooooooooooooo

Shall...

Let the night ungown itself,
Let the snows melt away,
Then we shall see who is...
Drenched more you than ye,
You perhaps can forget me
In the hours torn apart
The legs we climb
I remain sublime
And
Tongue to toe
My mouth does blow

Wow you can say now,
Wow you won't

For some more of the liqueur
Needs to flow,
From where we cum
And
To where we go...
Yet wait...
Albeit!

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if a woman loves a man

gives in to him
whenever
where ever
he wants it

and has her own ego

wrapped ...........................................YES CAPITALS WRAPPED......................

then men will lapse
in the arms of the woman
and colapse.
in wraps
then u can find
ur lIquer perhaps.

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Someone knows how to keep her man!
(and herself satisfied as well)

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'write on! let these words free.'

when u surface
my heart misses a beat
what will he now

say >??????

it should cover both

man and woman

his and her.... got it????
HOPEFULLY

I have a three-year old child, what's your excuse?

NONE ,

AS I DON'T HAVE ONE

THAT UNG..........

lovelyhoney

loved

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I have a three-year old child, what's your excuse?

NONE ,

AS I DON'T HAVE ONE

THAT UNG..........

loved

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