Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
An Invitation To the Royal Marriage
An Invitation To the Royal Marriage
They rung up my secretary,
So to say
My poems all against only one permitted,
Have been or will be or may be accepted.
The Queen will read out my poem speech,
I wrote for her
And Prince Harry
Will read the message
Written on behalf of mom
Diana
And
The Royalty guys
Will picture frame my poem
For the wedding
And
Will summon me finally,
For the handing...
But then I’m too far away,
The postal department may delay,
So I will ask them to keep a suit ready,
Just in case I’m summoned
At the last moment telephonically
Any way my love to the Royal Couple,
The Queen and Duke Philip
Shall on my behalf do,
This they’d meant too.
Style / type:
Free verse
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
Comments
weirdelf
Thu, 2011-02-24 02:26
Loved, you know I think you are quite mad.
and sometimes I love it and sometimes it scares me.
But this one I love!
Do you mind if I refrain from critical feedback on structure,etc, I like this as it is, warts and all.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Thu, 2011-02-24 08:14
Love your assessment JESS,
ur a true doctor of poetry
ask Shirley
YES ITS MADLY
CHEERED
LOVED
loved
author commentHooded Stranger
Thu, 2011-02-24 09:18
A Royal Wedding!
A Royal Wedding, oh fucking great!...more UK tax payers money to pay for one of the richest familes to have a good day out!...and where will my invitation be?
HS
--------------
Workshops are now open:
http://new.neopoet.com/workshop/find
--------------
With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.
crypticbard
Thu, 2011-02-24 17:25
your next tax return
will be your invitation. Everything else you can watch on BBC. :-)
__________________________________________________
'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Thu, 2011-02-24 12:29
i am the only master mastress and human being of my ownmaking ch
I am the only master,
Mistress
And
Human being,
Of my own making
And choosing
I don't damn care,
Whether anyone calls me
Mad or otherwise
All I try to ensure is,
Try not to rub unwontedly,
But won't accept a rub wantonly,
You know it Shirley.
No one will select my poetry,
They all say I can't write it,
Perhaps they all are ignorant,
Humourless too
And
This I only wish
They all knew.
loved
author commentloved
Thu, 2011-02-24 17:43
i knowsssssssssssssssssssssss
funnilliy and smillingly
LILLY LILLY
comments
I ONLY want
theM all to know...........
HUMOUR IS THE SPICE OF MY LIFE
I ONLY wish
some and all do venture
to join me
in my poetic adventure.
even if they must
lose their denture
loved
author commentloved
Thu, 2011-02-24 13:44
i know, i know ,that's why my face does glow ,when I read those
funnilliy and smillingly
LILLY LILLY
comments
I ONLY want
theM all to know...........
HUMOUR IS THE SPICE OF MY LIFE
I ONLY wish
some and all do venture
to join me
in my poetic adventure.
even if they must
lose their denture
loved
author comment