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Two poems read them if you have time Unwritten Laws AND ......... OR GLOSS OVER

You Make Me Laugh

AND

Unwritten Laws
All loving men
Adore their girlfriends
And
When they marry
Become husbands
They like other's women.
That’s the way the world goes
Since yesterday
And
Shall enter a tomorrow
Do you agree with me?
All of you
Women too!

You Make Me Laugh

Quite a few take your hand
But those who hold it
Are nought, minuscule few
Oh from heaven sent
And
On earth sought,
Where are such men due?
They hide in the expansiveness
Of a forgotten time,
No one can ever such guys ever find,
Yet I can
And
Do remind,
Such men do exist at times,
Who hold your hand?
Beyond expectation
But where are you
To find such men
In your life’s duration

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separate the two
thanks Ian

loved

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