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Laws of Nature Friend
Laws of Nature Friend
Neither you nor can I change
All make a coterie of friends,
who read and then the poet thanks
thus
doubling the comments
I now do not lament
40 poems in 42 days
Have been read by 10500 times
So why worry?
Poetry too is a kind of business
No one has any love for you,
As long as for them
To compose you continue.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
scribbler
Sat, 2011-02-05 23:34
laws
I guess we all have favorite poets on site. In 1st stanza one could write:
who read and then the poet thanks
thus
doubling the comments
but that's just an idea ..................scribbler
loved
Sun, 2011-02-06 22:46
thanks a lot
i have or had been dubbed as incorrigible
obstinate
to be abandoned
not prepared to learn
but i admire good help
and i know it
when its genuine
thanks frnd
u scribble well
better than most i read
loved
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