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A poem by old member here,Theo""Kaligantsaros"

(love Sprite)

In different worlds and other times
Perhaps our souls in different bodies
we rolled on pastures , lay on ground
shining smiles and throwing dice .

In times gone by when our spirits grew
into lives we hardly knew
Our vessels ghosted on by and through
like the knuckle bone games we played.

As children of the new nascent earth
we wove our stories tasted birth
a cloth for you a flag for me
a dance around the living tree.

Yet now In the lake of time a stone was thrown
our spirits shattered we've broke the bones
before and after confused we roam
blindly searching for each other.

My dual spirit where are you now
are you still sprite or angel
come cradle my spinning head
let me taste that ancient love
before I'm dead ,bring back the
innocence, return the wonder
before my soul is torn asunder,
by this last life of modern dread;
this radioactive science.

___________
28/Feb./ 2011

Comments

Hi, I recieved this poem from old member here and I would like to share it with you. Hope you like it.

Mona Rose

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All I want to know is why was Theo allowed to return and then disallowed? He posted one poem and then poof, gone, just like that.

No one has let me know why, not Andrew, Rett or Paul.

Aren't we all allowed a clean slate at the new Neopoet?

~A

Me either but I heard that he made some racist comment against Felix""Chumfin"", when I asked Chumfin he said that he don't know !!??and he don't want to include his name in this issue that he himself don't know about it.

I hope this New Neopoet will be new chance for all poets.

Mona Rose

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Mona ,
i thought this was a private discussion , between me and you and later Jess. much as we are friends , never bring me into such discussion again with out due and proper clearance from me. i must tell you that am very appalled to see this , issue discussed here. i detest it and i don't like it.
i don't know how you came about saying Theo made remarks about me. i don't think any such thing came between me and him and if yes and am not aware , then Neopoet board have their rules on issues that borders on such. . FOR SAME reason RAVENS NEST was sent packing form this site. why are you making his case special if the board found him guilty of the offense of racial abuse? again if neopoet want to give all offenders a clean slate then its a welcome idea.
please henceforth, take my name of this matter, such i demand.

thank you

chumfin

Who amoung us doesn't have a *split personality*, so to speak, let s/he cast the first stone.

We're all striving to be

1. the same.
2. different
3. don't know

And so we're either expanding our boundaries, confining ourselves in it, or stagnating in what we have deemed our reality without ever considering that there is a world of imagination beyond our own.

~A

He is the cruelest, nicest, hardest, great guide and mentor, good as human, and honest,when he comment on poems.
He used to criticize my work hardly and still up to now I’m taking his advices about my poetry ,coz he is too honest and does not know compliments .
I have received this poem yesterday and love it so I asked him if I can post it at Neopoet as Bog entry and he agreed

.......

glad you like it
and it is heartfelt ;) is n't love spirit

Mona Rose

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Not a comment on poem (gonna get in trouble now) I think when a person is barred or suspended it should be announced why. This could prevent others from making the same mistake. My personal opinion and nothing more.........Stan

Thanks Stan for the comment

Mona Rose

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Yet now In the

lake of time

a stone was thrown
our spirits shattered we've broke the bones

loved

Thanks loved

Mona Rose

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If we can creat our own world then no one will cry in future.

oh
its 5:am here
good morning lol

Mona Rose

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thanks
its passed the time
we awake to a sunny morn
and no more snow is born

loved

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