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Gandhi's Approach To Writing Outlook
A performance of high stakes. When one enters the political or spiritual realm, an individuals own public words and actions become the terrain in which the creativity unfolds.,
Gandhi may have had brilliant or scatterbrained ideas; but in the end it was his capacity to appear credible to his followers, and to the rest of the world, by virtue of his example of his specific moments, that constituted the central aspects of his approach...,
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Sparrow 42
Sat, 2019-10-05 03:59
Medes
This would make a great subject for you to write a poem on.
I await your addition and streaming of same,
Yours Ian
Words can build a nation
medes879
Sat, 2019-10-05 12:18
The Showcase Show Down
The Show Case Show Down
A young fawn will swing
thoughts of a wedding ring;
Doesn't mean a thing
trce back the window arrow flow
shattered glass out on the patio;
love is in the air
pierced back the oven grill
vanish me...
thoughts to scream,
over the hills and far away
blessed in the market view
although we pretend to be
the show case show down
A spoonful of glue
yet no one ever knew
Mario Vitale
author commentSparrow 42
Sun, 2019-10-06 03:54
Medes
Your write is fine a spell check needed on line 4,
Your thoughts seem to scatter along the way,
In there you can write several pieces from each idea,
Beware of the line "Over the hill and far away"
It is an old line, and your imagination took a holiday lol.
Bring in something new like "Seeping into the distant horizon"
Or anything that you can say is yours.
Take care great to see you here, Yours Ian ..
Words can build a nation
medes879
Mon, 2019-10-07 15:53
Lift High The Torch
walk with me tender by the sea come make believe
the publlc eats some rotten cheese & do what the please
shattered dreams out the front porch swing ring a ling
pay for the announcement thing latter a tender scene
Mario Vitale
author commentmedes879
Mon, 2019-10-07 18:32
Meaningful Message
There is a mastery of discipline in this. First, the stanzas, they all have four lines and a perfect rhyme-scheme and it works for it is not made for the sake of a rhyme. It is not easy to rhyme this well where the rhyme makes sense and add to the meaning of the poem.
I admire the diction. You`ve done well here.
Cascading is leading with whole host of love. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned..
ur not in that web ever caught
read my moms smiles
and mothers day today
if you want to know
what lies behind a poets show
then smile before you go
me you don't yet know
Mario Vitale
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