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Splash Pool (parody)

Scribbler: Greetings all
Geezer: I know I’m kind of late…
Samary: I am really interested in
Samary: A piece of good imagery
Scribbler: Yep
Mark: It’s never too late to join in
B9Pat: confusion
Mark: Here is my own
Scribbler: Now
Mark: Do you think this is more of a showing?
Scribbler: yeah
B9Pat: Thank you Mark
Samary: I got more tactile
Scribbler: I think
Sparrow 42: Mark
Scribbler: Very good
Samary: sight, sound, feel…you
Mark: Agreed on that Sam
Pugilist: I’d like to expand on the concept
Lovedly: purely
Samary: symaesthesia?
B9Pat: An attempt at imagery
Scribbler: Let’s see…
Mark: Thanks Sam and yes I imagined
Cathy mccormick: the kitchen is sweating, its
Mark: I love that Cathy
cathy mccormick: thanks mark, inspiration:
Mark: indeed
Scribbler: So to keep thing simple for now we will assume tactile must be

Samary: You obviously don’t think that
Mark: Time to clean up my friend
Lovedly: it is getting more and more difficult for you stan
Scribbler: very
Pugilist: I like what Mark said
Samary: haha
Mark: I like that it is very nice
Mark: I admire that Samantha
Scribbler: OK
Mark: This has me smiling
Scribbler: AH HA!
Scribbler: I
cathy mccormick: could feel myself there too
Mark: I stick by my personal rules though
Samary: I stick by my personal rules
Samary: Scribbler are you misunderstanding?
Scribbler: Okey
Lovedly: dust me darling
Scribbler: To all shop members
Samary: Show not tell
Scribbler: In my humble opinion
Mark: I think detail is important but
Samary: Mark
Geezer: Hope I’m in…
B9Pat: Mark I like yours
Mark: Does touch need action involved?
Mark: yea! woohoo!
Scribbler: Stripper
Samary: Hi Stan
Scribbler: OK Sam
Samary: Not sure I understand this
Mark: What I mean to say is
Samary: Naked in Winters Deep
Mark: There was a splash
Samary: Have we given up?
Scribbler: Hmmm….
Cathy mccormick: want to make sure I am clear
Cathy mccormick: I think someone else should
Mark: Give it a go Cathy
Geezer: I’m all for…
Mark: Hanging on an image
Cathy mccormick: small “I”s” like my grandson
Scribbler: Hi Cathy
Scribbler: Sorry
Geezer: Sorry about…
Rula: Hello
Rula: I think I got the idea
Samary: How is one supposed to learn
Scribbler: LOL
Geezer: I agree
Scribbler: Other’s thoughts
Rula: Like a newly coined cent
Scribbler: Getting closer to the end
Rula: Sorry I’m late
Scribbler: Hi Rula


First time to read such a thing... I really like it!
And I'm really sorry I'm late.


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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It can be humorous but this one is just OK.
We did them a lot when AOL was running strong.
Some people could put them together while a chat room was was rolling and then post them.
They could be a lot of fun.
This took near 2 hours to put together.
Thanks for stopping by my first blog :~)
It's great to see you back around,


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Really made me smile some really great innuendo in here and a lovely piece of imagery for the imagery workshop! Well done.

Finding innuendos is half the challenge the other is who says what.
I wish I could have spent more time on it but it really is a brain drain.


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must really be out of it lol

I think we have been having more of a party than we realised Stan... lol

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