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COMPLETE THE SONNET -----MAYBE SOS

When I Go

When in the other world I, at last, bide
You will not ever, ever, really know
Nor will you say that you at all denied
That it was now my turn and time to go.

As I fling kisses so many misses
You would not come here ever for to see
How many came to savor my kisses
Because you have, at no time, been with me.

abab cdcd efef gg
to find the balance of this sonnet
what to say have you
ANYONE
of friendly NEOs

Comments

not spying I told stan
I will drop off and on
more off
than
ON
as I am a lonely
FREE VERSE
and
STAN IS AVERSE
he is Western expert
so I learn slowly
age also you know
can't keep pace
with poetic sprinters
lol

author comment

Hi, lovedly,
No one can complete your sonnet but you, my friend! You have a good start with 10 syllables in each line and a nice rhyming pattern. What is it you wish the last quatrain and couplet to tell us?
Thank you!
L

I have already posted ONE as remarks for Alan
do read that now
i'll remove the BLOG
THERE IS NO WAY TO RETAIN DRAFTS IN NEO
HENCE BLOGS

author comment

Ok! I will try to hunt it down!
Thanks,
L

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