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TREAT THIS BLOG AS POETRY FOR THE SEVEN DAYS I WON'T POST ANY A SALUTE TO JOE

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2015-09-19 20:33

TREAT THIS BLOG AS POETRY
FOR THE SEVEN DAYS
I WON'T POST ANY
A SALUTE TO JOE

Poetic Vibes

Sad...
not many have had the vibes...
that you tried to present...
as a poetic present...
in nuptials eyes...
look around all are wise...
and how you see poetry is no surmise....
Bless you..
it opens one’s eyes...
as it evolves from the depths of gravitation...
Deep within the hearts of deprivation...
when a poet consumes..
his thoughts ignite...
on paper one doesn't damn care...
what the other thinks...
Poetry is no grammar,
nor is it glamour...
it stinks at times and pricks...
like thorns but believe
you me...
it does relieve....
the misery of a bleeding nose...
bleeding pokes by a thorny rose...
then all is fragrance in the air...
who damn does care...?
burn the readers all out...
they are just a bunch
in search of a clout...
You alone have ornamented this one...
to hell with anyone...
who does or does not dwell...
within your emotion...
anyone can that tell...
you, let flow out of you
and
what a relief phew!!!
The readers finally wipe their eyes...
and say...
nay the poet is on his right pathway...
so as an original
a virginous poet does stay...
as I do always..

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Sparrow

Sun, 2015-09-20 04:12

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This will be my last comment for a while, your write here should be a poem as it is really good.
Over the years we have been shouting at the ether for change, and at those lazy people that do not comment and seem to think that this is a place just to stream their works for praise, if you check my Blog you will see my figures, and as there is no counter here as there use to be I am giving up, Over the last few years I have given about 3000 plus hours, am I wasting my time I am beginning to think so.
Take care young Bard I will talk to you later, I am not closing my account, so I can still read what goes on,
Yours as always Ian.T

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

lovedly

Sun, 2015-09-20 09:45

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as no one reads me
as much as you do
so for my sake
take care
beware
I do care

This is a good poem
but ur masters had placed restrictions
hence I shall post it today
Later may
have a gooder Sunday!
go out in the Sun and play

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lovedly

Sun, 2015-09-20 09:45

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as no one reads me
as much as you do
so for my sake
take care
beware
I do care

This is a good poem
but ur masters had placed restrictions
hence I shall post it today
Later may
have a gooder Sunday!
go out in the Sun and play

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Geremia

Sun, 2015-09-20 10:59

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I have deleted most of my poetry Loved and you, Ian, are the rare consistent commenters I m going don the line and unpublishing others. Loved is very perceptive. This is not the site for me, but I will still write to keep a sharp mind and find an occasional ""oeuvre acceptée""par ceux qui savent ce que c'"ést la poésie"" Que les mots courent libre,du Coeur. Rien de ""recherché"".seul la vérité de notre âme.....

Joseph.

lovedly

Mon, 2015-09-21 01:30

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and
convert it to poetry
now I won't as your words are golden
joe believe me
u r a rarest of rarest entity
don't delete your poetry
let others read and learn from posterity
when it does so be

kindly translate ur words unheard into English please
thank you Joe you have been a source of sun
to a poet like me
who knows nothing much about poetry
no nuances
except that it falls off me
as the Niagara does
you have seen..
Hope you continue
as it will ease pain
now I can feel!

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Sparrow

Mon, 2015-09-21 03:44

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This piece whether Blog or poem is great and a tribute, not only to Joe, but all those that suffer to make poetry tell a story.
Many I hope will read and give you good feedback, I shall just say excellent young Bard..
Yours as always Ian..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Geremia

Mon, 2015-09-21 10:13

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Thank you, my dear, dear friend, I am slowly withdrawing from this site. I gave it a second try, but I get no reaction, My poetry has lost its poetic value.

your friend and fellow poet,

joe

lovedly

Mon, 2015-09-21 12:58

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no no no
not at all
i read every word u post
and also u i do toast
brave guy joe
we all know

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Geremia

Mon, 2015-09-21 14:50

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I do find it difficult to write when you are mentally and physically unable.

Thank you, my friend, for supporting me,[

You have a good and tender heart and are deeply perceptive.

joe

Sparrow

Mon, 2015-09-21 19:01

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You keep writing as there are many that you can help and not only that it will help yourself.
Your poems are well read and we look forward to seeing you here,
Now be a good lad and stay as you are, and write some more for us, Yours Ian..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

lovedly

Mon, 2015-09-21 20:50

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you stay and heal early
your God willing

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Geremia

Tue, 2015-09-22 09:21

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Doctor's last visit: I must keep my mind sharp, I will write even if it is crap. THANK YOU MY GOOD AND DEAR FRIENDS,

JOE

lovedly

Tue, 2015-09-22 13:04

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and Ian Loved Stan our man
so many stand besides you

keep the mind active
we command
okay COMMEND OKAY desire of you
says this our best friend
doc too
obey poet of delight will you?

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