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spermodiac friends hold em tight for 12 hours here only then read this

As I trudge along the walking path of time
I lose all friends of mine

So never mind
you will also one day
some day
if not any day
will also be lost not to be found

friends are a class breed
like human seed
of which only one counts..

all others are like free coupons
lodge them in the tins of garbage
let loose such useless baggage
they have lost you on all counts

friends are only friends
when free goes
a scotch round

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replaced she relented

Her heart melted
My heart was palpitating
she was very young
but like a Friday born
really pretty not handsome

she had won my heart
all the month gone through
I knew she would relent
as she had no clue

my eyes wear a magnetic look

I never stare
but others know my smile
and she relented
come next week
I shall pull out your teeth

but I knew she was only joking with me
an appointment she gave me

I smiled grabbed the card
and came home
she will save the tooth
be it the last wish I'd owned

She smiled...
young as she was
she knew my heart was not a sexy one for her
but I yet don't know
how her heart I'd won

Come Sunday!

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Hi Lovedly, have to say, my dentist most definitely does not have this effect on me! Jxx

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Well come in new bee
a NEO POET YOU B

swallows are a delight
so is your poetry
as long as new comer
guys and gals
don't mistake
what by swallow
you'd meant
being far away
from the continent

still with Neopoet
love of poetry cement
most importantly
comment

then poets like me
read without comment
shall not lament

so many are like me
I can see
but I speak my mind
they churn
and
only teeth grind

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Last but not least..... love this. Jx

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Today is a very hot day
the world over all say
have a fanny day
at night
all friendly hearts
do say

twill be cooler
hopefully, met's relay
have a blessed day
and
be blessed
as always

HEY, guys
you have many
gals and guys around
you today
as always

So look
just look
at these opening up flowers
hoping the night will be cooler
as the standing stamen
side by side
is smiling
to enter

We all live in HOPE!
don't we!
You too so do!!!

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It's boiling hot here too. Phew! Jxx

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how many times do you

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That is just too much information Mr Lovedly..... :-)
Is that 5 times a day....... or 5 a year?
Eeeh, when I were growing up, we were lucky to 'ave a bloody tub to put water in.
Jx

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5 times a day ma'am
its THE SAHARaaaaaaaaaaa desert here!

ur in UK
may be once in 5 years
hahahahaaaa
I like ur humour
it relishes my mind's tumour
nice knowing you ma'am
stay warm
then cool down!!!!

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Think we're in for a thunderstorm - hope it's a good 'un. Jx

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you and I are now bathing
in the middle of Thames

We shall swim
across all currents
which within tides remain

but promise me
hope and happiness
you shall sustain
okay contain

heat or no heat
the wildness of the winds
will two neopoets retain
okay sustain!

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We shall probably share a hospital ward as well, if we're swimming in the Thames :-)
Thunder arrived, I'm trying to capture it, but it won't play and my blank doc remains blank.
Jx

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MENTAL
but meant orthopedic-al

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No, after swimming in The Thames, it would probably be gastric - al Jx

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sweet water

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such a vast presentation
giving birth to petrichor

Today after having read all comments
I have become sure
poetry is simply an emotion
nothing less, no more
and the deprivation for seeding
a poet's version
is all the more pronounced
as poetic manure
and
some lost their son
others dads,
we all normally do
a few hubby
and some maybe a wifey too

what ever it may be
loss is a loss
and out of such human disparity
comes out poetry
from you and me

I miss kisses mostly
and that's my only grouse
still my mind ensures
I do arouse
when passers by like you
travel far and wide
and heavens smile
'tis my surmise..

How now I wish I had read you before
so many above know
that I only guffaw
like a circus clown no less no more
he's the RING MASTER
I assure

some know I am carrying spare meat
waffle it they call it..

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I wouldn't mind being the piper
if gal after gal came to me
like a storm
and as we warmed
they merged within
all the gals would give me pleasure
and the Sabath's gift
will be a life long treasure

I would be the fatter one only
as gals continue to dance around me slowly
never would feel lonely
A HAPPY SABBATH DAY for me
with all the girlies

WE LOVE AND LIVE LIFE ONCE ONLY
Sabaths come and go oftenly

So let me be that pied piper lady
and gals would dance with me
with glee
very very happily !!!!

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posted as poem
hence removed from this graveyard
amen

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Oh heck, that's a bit bleak, I'd rather think we are part of a greater picture.........
Just writing a poem on it now. Jx

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know
all about the picture
how so ever small or big
we all are simple participants
some wear pants
some don't

men I mean
lady poet
sure enough u don't

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Extra large ones....... unless I'm gardening! Jx

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Please don't forget me
I know I won't be missed
but do daily read me
from my THIS compiled poetry
at least it will appear foremost daily
Thank you poet
LADY!

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I hope your trip is a nice one and of course we'll miss you. Jxx

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I hope your trip is a nice one and of course we'll miss you. Jxx

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form and ok forum
have you read some of these in waiting list
also read ANDREWS and post your comments kindly

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Lovedly,ok have found and commented.Jx

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A bit of correction
We all know how an anaconda looks like
compare with male's penis
that's friend the serpent
and
apples if you cut into two
there you find two seeds
one on left, the other right
that was testicles
and so penis injected
as an anaconda spewed
and the eve withdrew
and
then tasting apples hanging grew
thus were born
we two
you and me
we and she
and all over this world's progeny
the burden was shared by so many
anacondas too
that's why now we have only billions 7.5 ....
only
be glad not too few
all will add more 'tis true!

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The most beautiful
are butterflies
and
short lived

before our eyes
butterfly dies

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you are the most pragmatic lady/lada...
ever born on the earth.... your heaven....
let others go to hell....
they deserve that well..
the earth is heaven
if you wish to enjoy
when
ALIVE.......

Those who can't...
may alone in hell survive.....
wish them well ----
scare them...
they will serve you
WELL...
as you are masters of heaven
on mom earth...

They will be awaiting a turn in hell....
they won't be able to tell.....
this EARTH alone is Heaven....
I can safely tell.....
I alone the cat do bell...
you can that spread...
we all enjoy our life...
as one can now tell...

Show them the way to Lonely Hell......

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WE ALL ARE EQUAL
WHEN DEAD AND BORN

NUDITY IS MY FIRST LOVE
I HATE CLOTHES

SOME SEX WITH FULL CLOTHES
GOD KNOWS WHAT COMES AND GOES

EVEN HEAVEN KNOWS
THEY HAVE NO SWEET SMELLING NOSE
SKIN IS FORSAKEN DEEP
LET SUCH GUYS FOR EVER WEEP

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Very good theory believe it daily

Soul in real life is magnetism
After life it’s just a memory

Peace love dialogue all is theory
Lusty love only is our
Human life story

and this is poetry truly

Hush...
moony looks after loony
and those
in hospy mainly

very good
God comes in only
when we fail
else
at all times
we must and have to look
after ourselves

Indie gals are a beauty
they marry not an Indie
but go live in Dubai/Amsty
Golden city
lots of money!

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As I read through your poem, then read all the comments posted, I think that some of them, as we have only just been introduced to Jane, are a little off course from your usual writes.
OK we all have lived in this world a long time, but the picture of biblical proportions was not needed as an answer to anything.
I hope you edit some of these to the norm and let Jane enjoy reading and learning,
Yours Ian..
Rebuked you are!!

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Churning milkiness
When I imagined
this all laughed at me
No god would do this
Yes
but genes can and would
(a kid in another kid's womb
at birth.... science reports)

Show me your tongue
Meeeeoooww

Well said man
time flies
but leaves us behind

No,
only time stands still
it’s we
who fly at tangents.....

Jusssssssss beautiful
see his will

God has given him a mind
he works
just doesn't grind
he has a mind!
(an armless painter
who lost both arms at 14)

I shall compose some other time
your poetry is nice
and
good rhyme
shine......

the phoenix rises from the dead...
and
Some humans are prone to self destruction
felloeeeeee poet...
God bliss.
yeeeeeee

Don’t fly
kiss her smile
while, while, all the while
as you smile
she shall come to you
as you fly

the pull of gravity is far less
than that of smilability

hence smile
as a passionate
simile....

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prosodically
metaphorically
and
smilingly
but not
caustically
may be
prosaically

this is perhaps
the nth poem written on me
across the skies
by gals and guys
am I not to feel honoured
O poets tell me
your love is unique
I say to thee you
are a poet equally
lovely
says
Lovedly

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wandering lovers poles apart

OOOOOOOOOO
love has to be earned
by Paying a price
forget all vice
sexiness is lusty
love is spice
you eat rice
others eat what else
do you know
you are young over here
so confess
your experience yet is far less

so love and lust
go hand in hand
play your own musical band
I am presently rolling on sand
hand in hand
entwined
with TIME

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