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silence AND bliss

AT TIMES IN SILENCE
LIES BLISS!
COMMENT
IF YOU WISH!

Comments

I always walk into the trap . . . but I learn things

I know you rarely read long pieces but this is being extreme.
It was far too much for me to take in.
"At" I am here already.
"Times" The past when things happened outside of now
"In" This is where you will find me most days.
"Silence" shouted as if the echo didn't come back sad.
"Lies" A distortion of the truth to please someone. Or resting..
"Bliss" feelings thrown inward to disturb the Spirit.
"Comment" These words are the thing this is.
"If" That space you wished you had filled
"You" Loved in the guise of a Bard we see each day
"Wish" something you want and not need..

Still love you, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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