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Far into Eternity

They say that the edge of eternity
Is round,
A curve that does the universe surround
That however is impossible
That I’ve found,
The remaining portion of the curve
Must be around
To complete a full circle,
So mathematics remains unsound
The edge of eternity
Has to be round
What goes up has to come down
So when eternity is absolutely round,
The actual meaning of existence
Then only can be found,
Eternity is eternity,
Not straight nor round
It must carry on
Till man’s origin is found
Which however
Shan’t ever,
Shan’t ever,
Shan’t ever
Be found…

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If those who espouse the big bang theory are correct, time did not exist until the bang occured and created space/time, So if one extropolates an expanding sphere of space/time, maybe the edge of eternity IS round.But my memory doesn't go quite that far back lol........stan

The sun and planets existed
The concept of time is man-made
Once they realised
The sun went around the earth,
For reasons beyond folly
They did not accept
That the earth actually did circle the sun
For vested interests,
Beyond the scope of my dwarfed minds imagination
LOLOLOLOLOL

loved

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