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I can't hold it!

wannabe a beeeeee

dissolve into the internet.!!!!
do you know… sugar dissolves in water… and is lost
so if you dissolve in the internet….
what will be the result
and at what cost!

now you know ..
let it be otherwise ….
face realities or hide behind fake masks
and say all else..
except poetry is false

I ain't sure Stan will agree with yaa'll
but poetry across the internet is a dying art
no one really damn cares no more
not even here of that I 'm damn well sure
for you scratch my back …..
as much as I do yours
then poetry my loved ones
is for me and you
that's for sure....

Wait one..
I do observe
all abababa cdcdcd abra cadabra style
of mundane poetry….
is being replaced …
by LOVED'S FREEErrrr style…
coz Loved creates
originality and history …
along with poetry,......

while others blow ears and noses
but still read …
you too Jess
my very dear
poet
friend
philosopher
guide what else
do you wish to hear.

Loved 's own deliberation
a simplistic version
as I read Jess's
composition..
this is just a transition...

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add more sugar that's all
Thanx 2 u afterall

loved

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when you dissolve sugar in water it is not lost., the water is sweetened. In fact sugar is not sweet until it is dissolved.

Sugar alone is just boring white crystals.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

the truth the whole truth
how fair and sweet
coming out from you ..
have a sweetened
weekend

loved

author comment

sweetly sour
but as you add chicken
its inviting and invigorating
thanks

loved

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