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guillotine poeticised ....

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Your works are, in this vein, excellent, I am not sure where you wander sometimes when the words fail to impress.
This is where you sit and let thought become restricted by reason, and the perception of your fellow travellers thoughts..
I think even the great Elf of the "Antipodes" will be pleased with this one lol.
I can see him now with Kookaburra on his cork less hat chasing the flies from his face as he tries to comment on this piece, good to see him back though I shall await his read of this one..
Meanwhile Loved, take care, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

but i would drop all the 'ands' - just me
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

Loved

Your works are, in this vein, excellent, I am not sure where you wander sometimes when the words fail to impress.
This is where you sit and let thought become restricted by reason, and the perception of your fellow travellers thoughts..
I think even the great Elf of the "Antipodes" will be pleased with this one lol.
I can see him now with Kookaburra on his cork less hat chasing the flies from his face as he tries to comment on this piece, good to see him back though I shall await his read of this one..
Meanwhile Loved, take care, Yours Ian.T

i love this loved

but i would drop all the 'ands' - just me
love judy

loved

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