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Classic Poets Of NewNeopoet!
Each one on this old,
Now new neopoet
Is a classic
I learn from the very core
That each one of you reveals
From the fathoms
Of your hearts!
How I wish I too had
Such a fathomless heart,
As love sinks deep
In each poem I read
My mind does plead
Oh Loved
When wilt thou accomplish
Such a deed
I wonder and shudder
That’s all indeed.
Your poetries are jewels
Strewn across the Internet
I have by now fully screened
But nothing comes in-between
Neopoet and betwixt us all
That’s all
What I really mean.
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Comments
raj
Thu, 2010-11-11 14:03
Dear Loved
the very essence of your poem is testimony of your sensitivities, your unassuming nature, spontaienity, which in itself are such fine qualities worthy of emulation...please do not undermine yourself ..
very warmly...
raj (sublime_ocean)
loved
Sun, 2011-08-14 12:44
how grateful am I
to that some one,
who dug deep
and surfaced a blog ,
I'd love to convert into
steamline poetry
Twas a forgotten blog
now in stream hopefully...
thanks raj to thee
loved
author commentscribbler
Thu, 2010-11-11 22:28
classic
You are a classic in your own right you know.......scribbler
Race_9togo
Thu, 2010-11-11 23:06
Loved,
"Your poetries are jewels
Strewn across the Internet"
Talking about yourself again, I see.
heehee.
each poem you
inscribe
convolutes my heart
uravels in my head
forcing me to think
unfolding in my soul
Respectfully, Race
"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo
http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Race_9togo
loved
Sun, 2011-08-14 12:37
My Personal Thanks
"Your poetries are jewels
Strewn across the Internet
Wow how'd i miss these lovely words
thanks again....
To all of you
who have taken
so much time
to read my poetic views
and
also simultaneously
raise my pedestal too .
thank you
loved
loved
author commentmagics02
Fri, 2010-11-12 22:45
Loved
You are a writer and never underestimate yourself. We all write in our own song and tune. Everyone is different and to learn from each other is grand. That is what Neopoet has taught me. I like this little write of yours and hope all is well by you.
Love,Magics
loved
Sat, 2010-11-13 00:46
thanks
a great deal
for ur everlasting and solid support
as always
albeit i impose positivity
in all human beings
i at times portray
a default though it may
just be an act of lack of wisdom
and
as they always said
naivity meaning stupidity
but i learned as time lapsed
and ere i really collapsed
i became unassuming
slightly a shade better
than gloomy.
loved
author commentGeezer
Wed, 2010-11-17 12:07
In the grand scheme of things...
you are as an important part as any of us. I think you underestimate your worth. ~ Gee
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
loved
Wed, 2010-11-17 13:21
perhaps yes and perhaps coz
I SHALL
untill the
BELL TOLLS FOR ME
and or else folks
roll rfol lol
for or at me
i shall style
my own kind of poetry
a
MINISHAKINGSPEARE
that i be
i still like you all
and you poetry.
loved
author commentmand
Wed, 2010-11-17 12:16
I agree with Geezer
Love Mand xxxxxxxx
loved
Wed, 2010-11-17 13:25
that you do
appreciate me
is an honour
i am here
to bow down for you and before you
do let me know
where are you
for i shall come and go
anonymously
you will come to know
but a bit latelerly
when i have donned
my garg
once again of anonymity
till then my friend
help others read
and you too read me
unanimously
LOVEDLY
loved
author commentfaithmairee
Fri, 2011-06-17 19:31
How Very Lovely
How very lovely, loved. Your poem is sensitively and warmly written. Just lovely!
Love,
Faith
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
weirdelf
Sun, 2011-08-14 00:20
try the workshops
we can all improve our craft.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Eduardo Cruz
Sun, 2011-08-14 00:34
Oh loved
Your such a softy, and you don't even know it. hiding behind your veil of obsurity.
"come out, come out, where ever you are." We do see you!
So trust in what you do here.
Eddie
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
loved
Sun, 2011-08-14 09:26
I thank you Ed
for your beautiful sentiment
Obscurity is god sent
and
i needn't relent,
as i give my views
a descent scent
Heaven sent
from the crescent
Thank you for your lovely words
as a wonderful present.
loved
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