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Oh Father

Oh Father
Father forgives them
for they know not what they do...
This is a universal message left behind
by the Lord
over 2000 years ago,
Have you all forgotten
Small minds are like bad fish,
Undoubtedly,
Remove them and save the water,
If not other fish.
I am no poet,
But I dare anyone say a word to me,
I’ll eat them up to the bone
And then they will chew
The cud alone,

Be strong as strong as you can be,
xenia 465
I stand besides thee,
Tell me who the fucks has any guts,
I’ll slam them
wham, bam, jam, ma’am
And
Mutual what sham
so stand up friend?
Will ye?

Comments

Loved,

I know you mean well with this poem...but right now...it is not helping Rosina or Neopoet.

HS

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