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A LOVELY reflection of an apparition

A LOVELY reflection of an apparition
In the mirror of time,
Neither photograph nor any camera
Can capture a virtual view in design
As it's nought.
Life transforms into the desolation
Of future time,
We all get absorbed metaphorically
And leave behind,
Virtual conjectures purely.

Good bye, fare thee well maiden,
You are a distant star,
Shining in heaven,
Perhaps they couldn't assimilate
What you had written.

Time and tide continue
To move and wait for no man
Said the bard
And
Is endorsed by this new one
Shakingspeare,
Says well done

LOVED ONCE

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Am I right lovely? How are you? In this line just go in and correct the apostrophe in it's in line
as it's nought

life transforms (into)

Just some suggests and I like this verse

Good bye, fare thee well maiden,
You are a distant star,
Shining in heaven,
Perhaps they couldn't assimilate
What you had written.

Good bye fare well maiden...

It is your write and just my thoughts wee they are at the moment.

Love to you and the family

Mona
xox

mona magic 02
after a long time i hear from you
thanks for the amendments too
rgds to u .
howsz dad now???
hope well too...

loved

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SO it has to be E XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX......SSSSsssssssss

loved

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