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Thou Shall Then
Thou Shall Then
Visit my latest blog,
Where your bard
Dug deep into the
Valleys and alleys
Of
MANHATTAN
And
Far beyond the reach of poets who weep.
Alas it was a great experience but a loss to a young guy
Who became friendly?
And
Shared secrets too,
Then all is history,
He hacked me through and through,
I wish all of us knew
The Internet is dicey,
Trust no one,
The only one you can,
Is yourself?
The you,
In uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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weirdelf
Wed, 2011-05-18 05:41
so sad
just so sad.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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loved
Wed, 2011-05-18 10:34
With due REGARDS and RESPECTS SIR!!!!!!!
I am not following you and you know...................
It will be kind
if you reserve your comments
Lets be gentle and polite
I hope you will understand
if you are an
Aussie gentleman.
From day one
ON NEOPOET
you have been anti me
i know on the Internet
we have to so accept.
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author commentweirdelf
Wed, 2011-05-18 13:49
settle down!
I was giving you feedback the way you do.
that's the most I've seen you talk in English, not esoteric verse, for years
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Wed, 2011-05-18 15:41
Please don't waste
urs and others
invalueable time
GOOD BYE
THE WHOLE SITE
KNOWS YOU BY NOW
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author commentweirdelf
Wed, 2011-05-18 16:17
Oh yes!
They do.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Wed, 2011-05-18 17:38
i don't comment on people who know a bit of poetry
I am not following you and you know...................
It will be kind
if you reserve your comments
Lets be gentle and polite
I hope you will understand
if you are an
Aussie gentleman
if ur not,
then be one
From day one
ON NEOPOET
you have been anti me
i know on the Internet
we have to so accept
AD VEY SAD THOUGH
TREAT THIS AS SHOUTING
IF YOU MAY
good bye keep ur comments to urself
loved
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