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wHEN wE gRIEVE

wHEN wE gRIEVE

When my grandma died
Years ago
They celebrated her age...

Times have changed
Those who lived well
Drink to their good life
Passed by them

In heaven they will be blessed
Neither would they know
Nor you.
Take rest
THEN
Normal work continue

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I like this tad bit of yours and wanted to tell you so. I have nothing to crit just I like it

Blessings
Mona

You know our friend crypticbard

lost his aged nana
he asked how to grieve.
i only wanted
to help relieve.

loved

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Of the fellow writers on here loved and you are to be admired for this. Thank you for telling me

Mona
xox

.Please send him a message

He is perhaps
In a state of shock,
Will need your comfort
At this hour of grief.
No matter how old
The departed soul may be,
We have to feel a void,
For some time.
It’s at this hour
We need friends
Upon whose shoulders
We can rest our heads and cry

loved

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i know he will appreciate this...................stan

YOU
may like to send him a
condolence or helpful message
thanks

loved

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nice of u
we must come forth at the hour of grief
in joy
many come even univited

loved

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this deeply.
And I am in short supply of stuff to drink
and saving the champagne for my wedding anniversary!

__________________________________________________
'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

after the campagney
for your wedding delight!
that's ok right?

loved

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and many years toast us both
for we have kept our troth
and rekindled love's daily broth

__________________________________________________
'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

an Internet sweet heart
never as friends
should we part.
till from this unverse
we depart

loved

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