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We Shouldn’t Go Loose, Else We’ll Lose

We Shouldn’t Go Loose, Else We’ll Lose

Your comparison
Of the modalities of blissful love
To the changing seasonal flowers,
Is a wondrous thought...?

If you permit me to say,
The lips match the tulip,
The sunrise the eyes
What a surprise,
The blush of a rose
I once thought
Was only my repose

But the budding lotus
Takes my heart away,
The dew drops
Remind me of the final moments
Of lover’s play
You so vividly your ecstasy display
Blessed is the one, who came,
Below your soft weight
Albeit!

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