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Our Dreams

Our Dreams

The dreams we dream
Sometimes I do dream
The dreams we dream
Are unfounded,
Simple imaginations
Hopes and desires

We all want to dream,
Fantasize our lovers
Then we hope
And wish
Dreams come true
For me and you

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if we don't just dream

cheers,
Jess
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I am one not to dream I live them every moment of my life. for I want no regrets in my life.I have lived more life then most. If I think something I do it to dream for me is a waste of good energy that I can apply to something useful.
I like your poem, because I do recognize the dreams of the world which I myself do not believe in. I stop being domisdicated long ago by the world. my drum beats hard and loud.

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

Just Imagine
Martin Luther King,
Hadn’t given his dream speech
What would have been the world today?
Dreams we dream,
Even if we don't want to,
As we have no control over our sleep,
Domesticated or otherwise
As it may please you

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I don't dream or at lease I don't remember any. I was told once that I do dream, but it is because when I open my eyes my concentration is on that I woke up and have thinks to do and the dream is not part of that reality. The dream of Martin Luther was a metaphor on how we should live so using his statement is in the wrong place for its purpose was a different one then yours. you do not have to accept my opinion. because to me its my reality of how I live.
it is not how you might live. I do not know that.
Eddie

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LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

SO RrrrrrrrrrrrrR UUUUUUUUUUUUUU
AND
u r entitled to ur own version
thanks for the read
at least

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