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I Will Follow You
I will come after you
Like B,and C after A
like stink follows a fart
as quick as I am able
I will follow you
like an explosion
After a spark
I will come after you
like a a race horse
On the inside
track
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weirdelf
Sun, 2014-05-11 15:19
Fine similes.
There is an interesting layered effect from the different imagery.
cheers,
Jess
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IKnowNoBox
Sun, 2014-05-11 15:29
Thanks Jess
The inspiration for this write has been out of my life for sometime now. Though what she left has been worth the initial romance.. er fling.
In ink,
David
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