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An Ember Burns

A once raging fire
Now no more

Extinguished
Mostly
But, an
Ember
Remains

Burning still
Unfazed
Ready to ignite a
New fire
Someday

Comments

You call for something to burn, to reignite your feelings.
There is no need to call, just think inwardly and see the fire waiting.
We have all at sometime felt the fire die down and sought out a means to relight the passion of free thought.
Patience young writer there at your fingertips are the tools to express the thoughts you have and there to light that fire again.
A good piece and I expect to see more from your finger tips,
Yours, Ian.T

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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

I have pushed my use of acrostics to new levels. It is good to be back.
In ink,
david

author comment

I am getting too old for this, I completely missed that this was an acrostic piece.
I find acrostics easy to do, well the straight forward ones, there are many forms to investigate as it was a way of encrypting messages not sure when it began but an interesting subject,
Take care and thanks for pointing out my missing it,
Yours Ian..
PS:- I notice that there are no comments from you on my recent writings, it would be great if you could have an opinion on them it is the life blood of Neopoet..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

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