Extracts from Wiki about Fibs, I had never heard of them until Jess added the form to his workshop Ideas, even then I didn't realise that the usual total is 99 syllables, but that's typical of me.
I wrote a piece on Vincent van Gogh, as he painted many Sunflowers, and I wondered if he ever really looked at the symmetry of their faces, anyway here is what the Wiki says...

Mostly written by Wesley :-

This was an instructional comment on my Cata poem but I feel this will be of use to all that are doing this workshop...

Have tried for a few times to find the original of :-

Off-Network (rewrite for BlueDemon77 Relativity Workshop)

I am sorry but this just made it past my scope for taking things in and assessing both writes.

I tried at first to find the original, then that having been done, after a lot of reading and time wasted.

I tried to compare the two Putting them one under the other, then as two columns side by side to read the changes.

Please leave your proper comments on the workshop page,
Thank you yours Ian.T

21st May 2013

I'm not certain if the blue
of the smoke is a trick
of my eyes or if the
plume is as sad
as I am

This cigarette is not sentient
it does not know it burns
but you know you do
and yet

One day this self-destructive behaviour
will kill you all and leave me
here thinking myself
at fault

at least then when I write
about smoke it will
that of your pyre
your peace

ALL
For God’s sake,
God bashing
God hating,
God believing
God disbelieving
Is getting on my God damned nerves,
For God’s sake
Can't we drop God?
For a God damned while,
God bothering,
Bending Gods ear,
In this God forsaken place,
Is ungodly, so can we have a break,
We are here to write poetry.
There is no God in my cave
Or any other deity,
That's how I can rest.
Night everyone!!