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I can see that you put a lot of yourself into what you write. your feelings and passions are very valid. please continue sharing your gift of poetry here with us!

*hugs, Cat

you are a quality writer. You need to step outside your box & challenge yourself by writing from a different perspective. Take on a theme you wouldn't normally tackle & write it from someone else's perspective. I tend to find an awkward theme & step right in. Challenging yourself will increase your capacity to view the world make you a better writer.

Then you have the ability to write & allow the reader to see themselves in your poem.

This isn't an easy challenge but well worthwhile.

Good luck

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